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Susmita Behera

ମୁଁ ପ୍ରେମିକା...ଜୀବନ ର....☺️

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    ଆପଣଙ୍କ ରେଟିଙ୍ଗ୍

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    Gajendra Barik
    08 ଜୁନ 2020
    Your modern artistic approach on composing an Odia poetry is quite distinctive and appreciable. Only one thing to apprise you that making a simple thing more difficult expression is no more an intelligence. When one happened to handle the expression of simple imotions more critically , life becomes a mess. Truth is very simple and firm .No Storm and no obstacle can make an alteration to it . This is simply a poetry of life , a living truth of love and imotions . Though the outside world can't make an easy sense to it . The brilliance of expression of deep love and imotions in the poetry is sky rising . It can cost the life of it's fiance for getting a detachment .
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    Ayushman Tripathy
    07 ଜୁନ 2020
    NYC
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    ଆପଣଙ୍କ ରେଟିଙ୍ଗ୍

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  • author
    Gajendra Barik
    08 ଜୁନ 2020
    Your modern artistic approach on composing an Odia poetry is quite distinctive and appreciable. Only one thing to apprise you that making a simple thing more difficult expression is no more an intelligence. When one happened to handle the expression of simple imotions more critically , life becomes a mess. Truth is very simple and firm .No Storm and no obstacle can make an alteration to it . This is simply a poetry of life , a living truth of love and imotions . Though the outside world can't make an easy sense to it . The brilliance of expression of deep love and imotions in the poetry is sky rising . It can cost the life of it's fiance for getting a detachment .
  • author
    Ayushman Tripathy
    07 ଜୁନ 2020
    NYC